My poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sassy Fire Dragon (Newborn Zoner) on Friday, 14-Mar-2008 9:35:51

This is only one of mine please check it out and let me know

I Wish I Didn’t

I wish I didn’t have to feel this way.
I Wish I didn’t have to see you go away.
I wish I didn’t feel the need to cry.
I wish I didn’t know why.
I wish I didn’t have to see you go.
I wish I didn’t have to really know.
I wish I didn’t like you.
I wish I didn’t have to miss you.
I wish you would stay.
I wish you didn’t want to go away.
I wish you weren’t going to live so far away.
I wish all these things I could not say through my tears.
I wish you would listen to these words with your heart and not your mind and ears.
I wish I didn’t really care so much.
I wish I wasn’t almost crying as I wrote this.
And even though you haven’t left yet, that I didn’t miss you.

Post 2 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Friday, 14-Mar-2008 12:46:38

aww that is so sweet, and truly sad. Made my heart cry a little.

Post 3 by Raskolnikov (I'll have the last word, thank you!) on Sunday, 16-Mar-2008 1:33:45

this is filled with emotion, and reflecting on these words of your's helps me understand that such experiences is what makes us stronger, and human at the same time. Yes, feeling this way is tough physically and psychologically, but I just try to remind myself in the moment I'm going through some emotional roller coaster that such feelings are shaping me into a deeper and more understanding person. You can learn a great deal about yourself in these moments. You gotta learn from bad experiences too. Thanks for posting this. I really liked it.

Post 4 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Sunday, 16-Mar-2008 15:02:30

I identify a lot with this. Wonderful job. Truly beautiful and heartfelt.

Post 5 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Sunday, 16-Mar-2008 16:22:02

awww girl, i felt that..good job, i know what that's like..stay strong!

Post 6 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Monday, 17-Mar-2008 9:50:04

Hey, I know how you feel. Your poem seemed really sad. You'll feel that way for awhile, but you'll be all right just give yourself time. Writing helps as well. It helps you express yourself. Hey, if you have other poems feel free to write it here.

Post 7 by Black Prince (Veteran Zoner) on Saturday, 29-Mar-2008 1:20:17

Aww. I love it. It jumped of the page.